I really, really like it. The feel of it and the words you use to create the images are simply right.

I really liked the way you described Arthur - how he didn't really let people to get to know him. I see him like that on the show, so it *is* in character. And Morgana! I love your Morgana!

It was his first minor act of rebellion in his working life. God did he relish it.
I'm right there with you, Arthur D:

When will we see more? ;-) I can't wait to see Arthur's reaction to Merlin and vice versa. I've got a feeling it'll be rather epic.