omg awesome!! I LOVE the idea for this story, and your style of writing is fantastic! ;D the information we learned about Jensen and Jared's lives thus far is perfect, giving us the set up about how people see them and how they try to be. I love how they differ and yet have some things that are similar. like being kind to Mab, not knowing who she really was ;)

I'm so incredibly anxious for the next chapter. you've got me completely hooked ;D