This is good! A minor misspelling, though: “Aren’t you made at your dad at all?”
I love the premise and your execution - and these lines are pure gold: Sam Winchester was dangerous. Thanks to his father preparing him and his brother to battle down the demon that killed their mom.
However, thanks to Dean, he knew how to flirt with girls and treat them right. He knew unconditional love of family and how his brother will always have his back. He knew how to do stupid tricks with lighters and his dagger. He learned how to hustle with the best of them.
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Date: 2010-05-25 05:25 am (UTC)I love the premise and your execution - and these lines are pure gold: Sam Winchester was dangerous. Thanks to his father preparing him and his brother to battle down the demon that killed their mom.
However, thanks to Dean, he knew how to flirt with girls and treat them right. He knew unconditional love of family and how his brother will always have his back. He knew how to do stupid tricks with lighters and his dagger. He learned how to hustle with the best of them.
Pure gold, I tell you.