This was amazing Truely amazing As soon as I read the epilouge I was hooked It feels like a fairy tale but not a commercial one but a Hans Christian Anderson one Full of knowledge and a place where magic is an element akin to water I dont think it was lacking anything To analyse something to much (although that is what I do) is to ultimately kill the enjoyment and mystery out of doing it Sometimes This is one of those things It is to be taken at face value It is not I think a retelling of Beauty and the Beast as there is only one similiarity between the two The fact that Will is a beast The rest is yours, the characters may not be nor the town but the situation you've put them in is As much as i dont want it to end the last few paragraphs rang true for me I'm the sort that never wants the good things to end, who does really I've been known to keep writing chapters for a fic cos i like the character too much But things have to end Also what an amazing way to end it Kudos to you
As a sidenote I really do like analysing things, writing giant massive reviews on books/stories but here it wasnt needed Here all that was needed was praise :D
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This will probably be longer than I intend
Date: 2010-04-04 04:51 am (UTC)Truely amazing
As soon as I read the epilouge I was hooked
It feels like a fairy tale but not a commercial one but a Hans Christian Anderson one
Full of knowledge and a place where magic is an element akin to water
I dont think it was lacking anything
To analyse something to much (although that is what I do) is to ultimately kill the enjoyment and mystery out of doing it
Sometimes
This is one of those things
It is to be taken at face value
It is not I think a retelling of Beauty and the Beast as there is only one similiarity between the two
The fact that Will is a beast
The rest is yours, the characters may not be nor the town but the situation you've put them in is
As much as i dont want it to end the last few paragraphs rang true for me
I'm the sort that never wants the good things to end, who does really
I've been known to keep writing chapters for a fic cos i like the character too much
But things have to end
Also what an amazing way to end it
Kudos to you
As a sidenote I really do like analysing things, writing giant massive reviews on books/stories but here it wasnt needed
Here all that was needed was praise
:D