I know the fic could have been better. That some parts seemed tacked on and slow. But I'm proud considering I wrote it in a four day marathon write. Yes there are things that I wish I could've fixed. And I'll remember your helpful comments when I participate next year. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story despite all it's shortcomings and cliches. :) I really like this fic and I enjoyed writing it. I loved the characters especially Beast!Will. And I'm glad that you liked it.